Yes you have. Be patient. The best is yet to come.
Good story. The pain... and the hope these two fine people share radiates off the page.
Last edited by Morgana; 07/15/2507:30 AM.
Morgana
A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.