Such a great TOGOM rewrite! I love how you worked with the episode! The focus on Clark's tiredness was very smart and well executed!
“It’s bad, isn’t it? Did something happen when you came back from the dead? Do you only have a certain amount of time? Like an expiry date? It’s past midnight so you’re not going to turn into a pumpkin. How much time did Superman say you have left? Maybe Dr. Hamilton can help you? Or Dr. Klein! He’s a smart guy. I’m sure they can all fix whatever it is. We can head down to STAR labs first-”
Love how Lois's mind goes into overdrive, it's always so fascinating when her thoughts start running with ideas! I love that about her, and you did it perfectly here!
“When Dillinger shot me, it didn’t hurt-”
“I’m glad. I mean, that’s such a strange thing to say, but I’m happy that dying wasn’t painful. Oh, what am I saying, Clark, you must have been terrified.” Lois grabbed another tissue and wiped up an errant tear.
*chuckles* Oh, Lois!
All in all, a lovely story! Thank you for sharing!! ❤❤
