I really enjoyed the atmosphere in the kitchen you created. And I'm very curious what's going on with Kevin and Mr. Logan. Is Alex extra strong, too? He comes across as maybe autistic, so this might create a bit of a problem in the long run.
I like it that your characters have special powers. This is a huge stumbling block I have when trying to create OCs. I love this whole - having superhuman abilities that you need to hide- so much that I'm afraid I'm just recreating Clark with another name.
Anyway, this was fun and I'd like to read more.
