Poor Clark! This is such a fun piece to read because I feel like SO MUCH happens and the whole action is basically 'a man answers a door.' lol But then it's so full and urgent!

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But I can't shake the feeling that I should find out what he's up to. What if my not going would result in Lois ending up hurt? What if this were the one chance I have at stopping this wedding?
This is such a nice depiction of his thought process. Lex is such a monster to set up a trap this way - he knows Superman will come if Superman thinks he can help or make Lois happy.

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I don't want us to have another fight.
So sad! This really tugged at me - it's so much of what their relationship is at this point in time.

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Her eyes fill with more tears and before I know what's happening, she's in my arms.
There's something really sweet in here. While he can be faster than a speeding bullet, it's like she has him living in the moment so deeply with her that she can move faster than he does. Like, he easily could have stopped her, but instead he'd invested in her emotions.

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He has no idea I'm onto him,” Lois claims.
"Claims" makes me nervous!

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One thing is for sure, Luthor is not going to see Superman anytime soon.
Good!

This is such a great follow-up! I love the idea that Superman avoids Lex's trap, and that he and Lois head into whatever comes next on the same team!


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