Wow! This is great. Nice to see such a hot, steamy fic in the regular fanfic section.
I love the idea you've come up with...changing the events that happened for Tempus Fugitive.
I always wondered what would have happened if she had found the note she left for herself. In fact, I remember falling down on the floor (way back when the episode orginally aired) and kicking my feet in frustration when Clark took the envelope from her and tore it up.
If I could have reached through the screen I would have strangled Mr. Wells...but anyway, back to the FDK (sorry I got consumed for a sec by Lois babble).
Great story, great idea, great interaction between Lois and Clark - err Superman. I'm in high anticipation of your next post!
