Oh, that´s great! I love it!
Adrienne is already quite near to the big secret. Once the family returns to Metropolis and Clark Kent shows up again... she just has to add 2 + 2, and the result will be Superman is Clark Kent. Hmmm...
So the Nord Korean government was behind the whole thing? That´s very definitely a case for the Human Rights Court! When this story is published - preferably in the Daily Planet - they will have some really big problems. I already can see Matt and Clark hauling some officials - hopefully including Kim Jong-Il - out of their palaces and transporting them to court! It would serve them right!
(and not only because of your fictional story!
But the scene when Lois tried to reach Clark telepathically...
It´s perfect!
