Wasn't able to read this story previously, but now I'm taking time to catch up. I really enjoy your fast paced writing style! Nice take on this story and perhaps we will read more from you in the future

Morgana

A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.