This was...amazing! You do a masterful job of capturing and conveying the emotions. From his weary resignation in the beginning to his joy in fellowship at the end, I was drawn in and felt so connected to him. I do always like to see Clark get his Lois, but this was very satisfying also!
Readers Note: I don't care about you not being able to write without referencing modern smart phones! They had space station colonies and holograms in the show, smart phones don't bother me at all, lol.
I've said this elsewhere, but I'll say it again here, I'm soo glad you decided to come hang out with us in Discord, and that you were willing to share your writing with us! It has a depth and beauty that I'm very much enjoying =)
I'm very much looking forward to part 2!
Come hang out in the Discord server! Just make a Discord account and click this
https://discord.gg/fv2bAVVUBQ to join. Discord can be a little intimidating, but we keep our server simple and are always happy to help people learn their way around!
