Hi Mary!

No verbs. Huh. I didn’t realize it either. Mind went to haiku instead.

From the structure it is quite clear she would have liked to do something against Clark getting shot. Her inaction caused his death. Of course what could she have done?

The stakato of thoughts is wonderfully delivered. It feels like she has these thoughts flashing through her mind in the span of a moment or two.

wave Michael


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