Thanks for all the feedback...keep it coming!
It really energizes me to write more when I know someone is reading it.
There are going to be a few twists and turns, so it may look a little bleaker before it gets better. I hope you'll all stick around for the ride.
And without trying to give the plot away, let me say Ann, that I could not envision in this story making Lois Lane a desperate woman, not in the sense of being willing to take back a LYING Clark Kent. NO, I believe she would have to see a real change before reconciliation could begin. I'm not out to make Dan a bad guy, either, though, anymore than the movie did of Hildi's fiancee. He's more comic relief than anything to me. Dan is the one character I would NOT want to be in this story.
mwhaahahhahhhaa!
Now I will shut up before I just give it all away...I've never been great at keeping surprises.
Although it helps that I'm not 100% sure how it's going to unfold myself. I just write and see what comes out. And I'm only a post ahead of you guys, so you see why it takes me a while to get it out.
Of course, I'm finding I seem to be more motivated to write when I know someone is going to hound me a little for it, go figure. I must be a masochist or something. LOL
Anyways, thanks for all the wonderful comments.
Marcy
