This has been a little hard to follow due to the unfortunate amount of time between the instalments, but now that I think I've got everything figured out so far, I can see this has a lot of potential for an interesting tale.
We have Lois as a mother (not something I'm too crazy about). Clark is apparently the father due to a pheromone induced morning of passion. Then before either has the chance to 'deal' with Lois' pregnancy, Nightfall intervenes and Superman disappears. Unfortunately, Lois never knew that Clark was Superman so she just thinks he ran away.
I think I've got it right. An intriquing set up so far. I think things will get real interesting once Lois finally finds out that Clark=Superman. I wonder who will be the one to tell her... Martha?
Looking forward to more.
Tank (who hopes that real life concerns will allow a somewhat quicker posting schedule)
