I'm a little embarrassed to admit that when you originally posted, I somehow only caught the last part of the post. It was good, but I went back yesterday to read it again and discovered that there was more and it was amazing.
I love the interactions between House and Lois, the way he bullied Clark into revealing the truth to the Lanes, their reaction, Martha's and Lois's protectiveness of Clark, and all the entertaining snark from all directions.
I've only seen a few episodes of House (medical shows don't really do it for me), but from what I've seen of the show you nailed his characterization.
Well done, I can't wait to see what you come up with next!
