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How when H.G. Wells and she were in the past thanks to Tempus, Mr. Wells’ words echoed and fit right into the song. And yet were different.

Once your story’s told
It never can grow old…

He was describing their story as timeless love, which generations to come never grew tired of hearing.

Besides Dr. Klein, H.G. Wells character was one of my favorites. This scene when he is telling Lois how she is remembered by the inhabitants of Utopia really did it for me. Thank you for writing such a thoughtful story using lyrics from a song to guide Lois throughout her life. Bravo!


Morgana

A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.