Jenni-
I was sooo glad to see this today. This chapter explains so much that we needed. Smooth writing. You take us right there with your descriptions of the hills, the water. I could even feel the cold, icy water, the pain. The emptiness he feels right now is palpable.
I'll admit I've been betaing this story. Jenni, this may top your other excellent stories!
LaurieD
