Good story! Looking forward to more! I agree the parts need to be a little longer. Im glad Lois and Clark will finally move past all the anger, and can start being real with each other. Love the emotion that you have portrayed through each character. Keep it going!! thumbsup

PLEASE Post more SOON!!

Thanks!!

Jaz
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Stress: The confusion created when ones' mind overrides the body's basic desire to choke the living daylights out of some idiot who desperately needs it.