What an
awesome interpretation of TOGOM!
It's such a good episode, and has instigated so many wonderful fanfics--many of which I have read and greatly enjoyed
. BUT, you managed to make this one so amazingly fresh and unique
.
How true that, really, the only person that can pin 'Clark Kent' to that nightclub IS Lois Lane. They are undercover. With people from the past that don't know
who these two reporters from the Daily Planet are. And in reality, these people could probably care less--they just want to get out of the situation as the police are arriving.
I can attribute a lot of the original episode 'problem' (Clark is dead, how can he live his life?), now thanks to your story, to Clark being sorta a bit paranoid. His whole life--this, this situation--is so much a fear that he has carried with him: being discovered.
Genius thought process!
Oh--and what better way to see where the police are with the story--to distance yourself FROM the story even more, than to call and try to get info about it!
. Love this!
Fantastic job--what a pleasure to read!
Laura
***...and really enjoyed their code!
