Loved it!
This is borderline territory, my dear... We may still be in the gfic side of the boards, but the temperature is darn hot 'round here! And while I wouldn't surely complain if you decide to continue the story, I think that "leaving us wanting more" is a perfect way to end it
So your hubby is a grammar Nazi? How sexy! And I mean it... I can't think of myself hanging with a guy who can't get his subjunctives right (which probably explains why I am still single at 36)
Thanks, as always, to my fabulous beta readers, Laura and Sue.
Now we know why Sue hasn't posted a new chapter in ages... She's too busy betaying for you! :P
groobie, I find reading your stories makes it more difficult to have my own characters keep their hands off each other. You're quickly making me fill up my deleted scene folder.
*Imagines Groobie dressed as Darth Vader trying to drag Virginia to the Dark Side of the boards*P.S.: Speaking of sequels... What about
Quick vs. Quickly vs.... Quickie?