First things first - I'm SO glad to see a new part up. When you emailed me and said you'd be away, I was had this horrifying thought that the story might be delayed.

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He’s starting to understand. He’s starting to realize that he doesn’t have to act like a living sacrifice, that he doesn’t need to buy his acceptance here. He’s starting to believe that there’s more. More for him.

Good.

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Sometimes her excuses can’t reach past the bars of the prison (the mask, the armor) he keeps around himself.

Yeah, well, I think even canon Clark could have those moments.

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Something hopeful and tender and surprised and grateful in his eyes

How he always looked at her, if she'd ever taken the time to notice it.

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Patience and understanding aren’t traits the old Lois Lane possessed

Understatement of the year, methinks.

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James hadn’t skipped a beat before wringing a promise out of him to cook them all a real meal.

LOL!

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“You’re definitely a better cook than me,”

So is any 4 year old with an Easy Bake Oven, but it's good to see her teasing him again.

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Only her who longs for something so specific and so impossible.

<shakes head>

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“I have something else for you,” he says, and sets a sheaf of papers down before her.

Swiss chocolate?

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Clark has been waging his own campaign,

Ah, even better!

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In short, she notices all her own tactics being used against her.

Hehehe! Smart man.

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Because if she can write again, then that means she can destroy Clark’s life all over again,

No, Lois. Now, more than ever, you *don't* have that power. Because you finally love him.

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But if I start writing articles about events and people in Coast City

Ahh...good point.

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and he does not bring his lips to hers.

I can understand why, but *man* that's disappointing.


Wait, what? You stopped *there*???? But...but...we need more. So much more! You're such a devious tease!


Battle On,
Deadly Chakram

"Being with you is stronger than me alone." ~ Clark Kent

"One little spark of inspiration is at the heart of all creation." ~ Figment the Dragon