Oh man! It is so good to look inside the character's minds. This is better than the original episode!
My only quibble is that Jack might not have been shaken, more like angry. Luthor tipped his hand when he asked Lois about him. Since when does that man concern himself with a copy boy?
Next!
Morgana
A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.
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