I haven't been commenting (shame on me), but I'm still very much enjoying the story, and squeeing with glee whenever a new part gets posted. This latest part is quite the cliff-hanger. I really hope Clark--or anyone, really--comes to save Lois, and I really hope this whole Ralph thing does't bite Lois in the rear.
Please keep posting!
(If you're really concerned about the pace or something, you could try posting more frequently. That should fix it.
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