Whoa... intriguing. There is a lot to play with here emotionally, especially if you remain in Lois' POV. Also, Superman in the movies tends to be more Kryptonian (read: hides his emotions) than human, while on TV we generally get more Clark Kent... I hope we see why he is so distant with Lois... I like KatherineKent's theory about him being abducted by the government... Very curious what direction you will take this.
Reach for the moon, for even if you fail, you'll still land among the stars... and who knows? Maybe you'll meet Superman along the way.
