Just caught up with this story, and I'm loving it!
Regarding VW: I didn't know who she is, but I didn't mind the comparison. I just visualized a very 'majestic' gesturing towards the room. And I have to agree with Gerry: correcting the reference in that way is just a throwoff.
Also, I'm with Wendy on telling her vs. not telling her he's Superman; I can't imagine him telling her and then dashing off for the rescue. He'd be so stressed anticipating her reaction that he'd probably run up against a wall or something
No, I think he would like to take his time explaining everything, so this part worked perfectly for me
Eagerly waiting for the next chapter!
Anna
