Ooo! A new story from Sarah! Yay!!
Off to a good start, I think.
I'm assuming that New Krypton also didn't happen, or that there's some reason they're not trying to get in touch with Zara or someone to find out about Kryptonian pregnancies. Or is it just that they don't have a way to get in touch?
I like L&C arguing over the sex of the baby.
Ultrasounds -- Did any of the previous ultrasounds show the sex of the baby? Couldn't the baby move while they're taking it? Of course, L&C could just say that they don't want to know until it's time. But then they run into problems when presumably the baby is born. Actually, that's going to cause a bunch of problems, isn't it? They won't be able to answer any questions, right down to gender and name. (And the poor kid, having to celebrate his/her own birthday on the wrong day...) Can't think of a better cover story, though. Not without worrying everyone that the baby has some kind of weird medical condition slowing his/her development.
Doc Klien's reaction to the holograms is funny. I'd like to see more elements like that in that scene.
Not sure what else to tell you, or what to ask (there's one question I'm very curious about but which I don't actually want to ask).
I'm excited to see you posting again, and interested in seeing what's in part two. It's just... well, I'd like to see more happening, more of a pace to the story. Just not sure what or how.
Paul
