Wow! And I thought I'd written cold, ruthless Luthors! This one is the most evil, chilling, calculating,
dangerous Luthor I have ever encountered. A complete monster. And he has Lois so completely in her control that I could easily see her believing that her days are numbered.
And now she's pregnant... how is she ever going to get away from him?
Like Helga, I think Kenneth is Clark - but what a different Clark! It sounds as if he's been hurt badly - he's shut himself down and become cold and distant.
This is very, very well-written, Sara. You made me shudder several times during that first long section. So effective and so menacing!
Twice a week... I think I can just about hold out that long!
Wendy
