Ooooh I just caught up with this story, TJ... love it so far
Very creepy, and you've got me DYING to know what's going to happen next! I love dark stories, and I love Altworld stories, so you hooked me right from the first part... though I have to agree with Tank in that a happy ending that's credible and that redeems Clark is going to be really really hard to concoct. Not that I think you can't do it
Speaking of endings, it would be great if we could get another part really really soon...
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