Hi Nicole,
Sorry it took me a while to comment on the ending.
I thought you wrapped it up well, and I would also suggest that you broke down the long paragraphs.
It does make it easier to read. I think I discovered that after I'd written a few stories, a long time ago.
I agree with Artemis, it would have been nice if Lois looked a second time and saw just who was in the picture.
Yours Jenni
