Hi,
Great part.
Beautiful!
“Ah, here they are. We’ll take your car and bring it right back in the morning.”
“See ya, Lois,” Jack said, opening the door.
“Okay, honey, get a good night sleep,” Martha said, as if it were a completely normal night and she were just tucking her child in.
Lois opened her mouth, still confused. Before she could say anything, they had all said ‘goodbye’ and scurried quickly out the door.
That so sweet!
More ASAP, please.
MAF