Wendy,
I said it once and I'll say it again (mostly because there is no record of me having said it the first time
) - this is just a great story. The interaction being Lois and Clark is dead on, I love the new angle on the pilot and their first meeting. I also admire the fact this is more than just a "they meet undercover, fall in love and that's that." Adding to the story and taking it beyond the original catch is brilliant.
I can't wait to see the next twist this story is going to take.