Hi,
Great piece.
Lois discover her father care.
Sam Lane doesn’t deserve to disappear in a witness program.
St John had been silent for several moments after that. Then, as the precinct came into sight below them, he'd said, "You may tell Inspector Henderson that I will be pleased to assist in his investigations."
Hope Nigel clear Sam.
And then he heard it. A long, high-pitched scream. It was a sound like an animal in distress, but he felt sure that the voice was human - a human being in intense pain.
He darted downwards. The scream came again, loud, uncontrollable, anguished.
There was someone in the club.
Damn ears.
More ASAP, please.
MAF