I apologize for not commenting any earlier, only just cought up on the 4 parts. Stupid homework.
You took us right into the heart of Lois and Clark's separation.
I feel so bad for them! Things are sort of looking up, but still. You convey their distress amazingly, Lynn!
I also like the way Clark was having flashbacks, which ended badly.
Poor guy.
Julie (waiting impatiently for more)