I've been sort of skimming this story because I don't have time to get fully involved in any long stories right now, but one thing caught my eye. Clark calls Lois 'Sweets'? EEEEWWWWW!! That is what my dad sometimes calls my mom, and we usually make fun of him for it -- my mom doesn't even like it. Icky! Clark is not my dad

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- Laura (who will read this completely when she has more time)