What's the concensus about this story I've been writing, shall I go on with it or do you think it will go anywhere? Any ideas about some plot ideas?

I've not written any more on it past the part 3

I'm all ears, and fingers at the keyboard.
Thanks.
Also, Should i be asking this on this board or a different one?

Thanks,
Nancy help

It's always such an embarrassment. Having to do away with someone. It's like announcing to the world that you lack the savvy and the finesse to deal with the problem more creatively. I mean, there have been times, naturally, when I've had to have people eliminated, but it's always saddened me. I've always felt like I've let myself down somehow.