This is so great Aria, I really like your twist on the pilot so far. All of Clark's feelings when he meets Lois for the first time were right on..

Poor Clark frown he really is a mess, Trask has really screwed him up..I can't wait to read the backstory on that!

~Liz

Lois: Can I go?
Clark: No.
Lois: Oh come on, Clark, why do we go through this? We both know I’m going to go.
Clark: Then why do you ask?
Lois: I’m trying to be nice.