Good solid adventure getting out the cave, and some interesting backstory from the camping guy.
And Fong needs to get past his bruised feelings and realize that if *he* thinks it could be a problem for a Strike Commander to fall in love with a psychic, then the psychic in question would definitely realize it, too. Jason summed it up -- he's gonna have to choose which is more important, the girl or his job.
And considering the job has been steadily killing him, and that if Mai Wing is a trained psychic she might could slide him into the Underground, it seems pretty much like a no brainer.
But then, he's not thinking with his brain right now
And, um, the plot's good too.
PJ