Lots of good stuff here, Wendy. I like the headline
I also liked the bit out on the street where she called him Clark, and he had to remind her that Clark wasn't there. That just felt right -- she *would* forget, under the circumstances, and that's the perfect way to remind her.
Same thing with her sobbing in the parking garage -- it's got to effect her, but she'd never break down where anyone could see. Except maybe for Clark, which is a tremendous expression of trust.
Have fun with Kae & post more, soon! (Kae, nag her for me, willya?
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PJ