Well written. I'm enjoying this so far. Your premise reminds me a bit of Marian Zimmer Bradley's stories about Darkover. I like it. Keep writing. 
I believe there's a hero in all of us that keeps us honest, gives us strength, makes us noble, and finally allows us to die with pride, even though sometimes we have to be steady and give up the thing we want the most. Even our dreams. -- Aunt May, Spider-Man 2
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