The more I hang out here, the more I get the feeling I'm wasting my time trying to write stories that have an a-plot -- and this is... well, it doesn't even have a B-plot, it's just A... I'm likely to bore people to death with it, I'm afraid.
Dude, A plots are awesome. I have total respect for them, they take so much work and ingenuity. You should go with it.
