Paul, this was great! Loved the way you poked fun at the more open plot holes in Chi of Steel. Now, if only the eps had had a *real* beta-reader of sorts, imagine how much better they could have been!
I enjoyed your little swipe at NK, too.
And at Dan.
And at Mike.
In fact, the only thing missing was a general swipe at Herb, but I'll forgive you.
Thanks for posting this, and hurrah for all our betas!
Hazel, who loved the MS line too
