Intruguing start! Well written, funny and just...well, just darn good!
Now, the only problem I see is... where's the next part?! When will it be up?
Pelican
Such a little thing really, a kiss...most people don't give it a moment's consideration. They kiss on meeting, they kiss on parting, that simple touching of flesh is taken entirely for granted as a basic human right.
Well written, funny and just...well, just darn good! 
