Another good instalment, Michael.
A good old fashion comic book fight scene, only with a little more 'reality' thrown in. I can see why you chose to 'guest star' Black Adam, as you needed someone who could 'take a super punch'. Still, he isn't exactly a common villian that the none comic reading masses would know, like Luthor, or the Joker. Of course, I know of him since I actually did a guest appearance in Power of Shazam number 10
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Good visual imagery, and we could really feel Superman's loss of control. We, like Maggie, stood back in horror watching what unfolded while still, secretly, cheering on Big Blue.
Interesting bit at the end. Clark's reaction story was very much in keeping with who he is, but we now are caught up in the mystery of the reasons for his reactions, just as Lois is.
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Tank (who thinks this would make a great elsworlds comic book mini-series)
