Didn't you say the parts are going to get longer...?
I love your Lois, as Tank said. I particularly enjoy the way you show her through other people's eyes and the way they react to her.
It's also wonderful to see an efficient and controlled Clark. This is surely because you gave him superpowers at a younger age; he's been doing this a lot longer, so he knows what he can do! But there's also the advantage you have of the written medium, where we can see exactly what Clark is thinking and doing.
So Intergang comes into the mix! Ooh, this is going to be messy!
You've got a great storyline here, Michael, with wonderfully defined characters. Give us MORE!
Hazel