Carol,
I'm loving this! I finally made time to read the first 4 parts yesterday, and I couldn't believe that I'd decided to read a WiP
and it was one that had ended at a particularly evil spot!
I was very relieved to see the next part had been posted!
I'm so glad that Lois is back to her old self and got rid of Dr Deter!
And Perry knows!
Sorry,
its just that one of my minor loves is a 'revelation but not' for one of the supporting characters, much like you've done with Perry here, so I got rather excited!
Loriel (who might manage to wait patiently for the last part!
)