Enter Lois, stage right! Hurray!
Congrats on making this Clark so *honest*... It always annoyed me to see Clark taking advantage of his secret i.d. to get his position at the DP. He didn't do it in LnC, and while he did do it here in your story, it was reluctantly and only when Perry gave him no choice.
You might want to watch some of your sentences, Michael. They drift towards run-on on occasion.
Your final line makes it clear that your Lois will be much like LnC's Lois - she hates to lose to anything. I hope we'll see some signs of friendship in there, too.
Hazel, who is looking forward to MORE!
