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Female Hawk
Kerth
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Comments go here.

Corrina. [Wave]

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Laurach
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Glad to see the new post. I am looking forward to what happens next. So far it seems like an interesting set up. Laura

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Morgana
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Waiting patiently.

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A writer's job is to think of new plots, create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

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AmyPrime
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I don't want it to be Barry. I want Barry to be a nice guy whom Lois never noticed! But it seems unlikely to be Paul, given that he's chosen to go away for the weekend. On the other hand, it seems like this weekend away may be a change from the original timeline, so maybe it is him? Hm.
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AntiKryptonite
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Boy, a lot going on in this chapter. I love the way Lois and Clark follow their prey..erm, I mean, assignments...together and how they keep up a constant stream. It's very much like they were in the show, I think, and quite a welcome change from how alone Clark was earlier.

I was really thinking Barry was Tempus, but now--now that they think he might be Tempus, interestingly--I'm not so sure. When Lois ran into him at the drugstore, he wanted to walk her home, and from our Lois's memories, it seems he probably was interested in her. I feel kind of bad for him after hearing how abruptly she cut him off. Good thing our Clark is more persistent. [Smile]

I'm worried for the younger Lois and hope they find out what's happening soon. I have a bad feeling about them sneaking into Paul's office--but only because they jinxed it by saying it would be easy! [Wink]

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Darth Michael
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[Smiley]
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From beyond the hotel room door, Clark detected a sound and focussed his vision through the wall. He watched with interest as young Lois crept along the corridor and leant her ear against the door.
[Big Grin]

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"Listened at the door."

Lois grinned. "If she'd come fifteen minutes ago ..."

[Clap]

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"You seem very keen for her to -"

"To get a hint about the delights in her future?"

Lois is a very bad girl.

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"You're not comfortable thinking about anything remotely sexual between you and a teenager," Lois said pragmatically.
Very, very bad.

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He wasn't sure he would ever adjust to a world with two Lois Lanes.
[Goofy]

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"There was Lana Lang."

"Tell me about her."

Danger! Danger!

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"She was pretty ... in a cardboard kind of way."
[Big Grin]

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"I like women with a lot more depth than that."
[Shock] Clark!

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Lois thought for a moment. "Paul was an angry young man with a vicious temper. At the time, I dressed up his anger in more acceptable terms ... determination, drive, single-mindedness, ambition ... but really, it was anger."
Huh.

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"OK," Clark conceded. "I ... I would feel more comfortable with you there. I don't usually use my powers to stalk young women."
[Big Grin]

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Her stomach felt as if she'd eaten something that was now slowly rotting, waiting only for a particularly inopportune moment to erupt.
Oh boy.

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What were Linda's ambitions for this weekend?
Uuuuuummmm…

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If two people - both alive - had been in there, why had it been so quiet?
Afterglow?

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From behind her came a sound. Like a small stone skittering along the sidewalk.
?

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Lois spun around.

No one was there.

/squints eyes/

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Clark dropped his head. "I can't, Lois."

Oh, Clark…

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"Barry Russo!" Lois exclaimed. "My one memory of Barry is that unless the temperature was over one hundred, he always wore a jean jacket."
Hmm… Tempus or is Lois collecting stalkers?

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"He's crouching down now," Clark continued. "He appears to be examining something on the ground."

[Huh]

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This is a reputable business."
[Lol]

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Anything creepy? Girls' underwear? Posters? Porn magazines?"
/still betting on Barry crushing on Paul and trying to get rid of the competition.

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"I'll draw him."

[Clap]

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"Research," Clark suggested. "If Barry was known as having an interest in environmental issues, Lois is going to notice if he suddenly knows nothing."

Ooooooh! Clever!

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"No," Clark said, smiling at her suggestion. "Just hang on. There's a guard about to unlock a door. We'll slip in behind him."

[Clap]

[Wave] Michael

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Female Hawk
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Laura I'm glad you find the set up interesting. I was concerned about how long it took to get things set up the way I needed them.

Morgana LOL I'm glad you're waiting patiently [Wink]

Amy

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I don't want it to be Barry.
You often see good in my potential bad guys!

AntiK

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I feel kind of bad for him after hearing how abruptly she cut him off. Good thing our Clark is more persistent.
Or perhaps, with a little more maturity, Lois will realise that she missed a quiet/good man (Barry) while she chased after Paul. This Lois was always more interested in Clark than she was in Superman (see Story 2 - First Days in Metropolis.)

Of course, the Barry Lois knew may not be the Barry Young Lois knows [Dizzy]

Michael

Loved you reactions! You're very good at using graemlins to express yourself. [Wink]

Re the [Huh] to Barry inspecting something on the ground - the answer will come in part 10.

Thanks to all for the comments,

Corrina.

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Darth Michael
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quote:
You're very good at using graemlins to express yourself.
[Embarrassed]

[Wave] Michael

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.Now I understand why Clark brings Lois to 1985... and yeah!! It WAS for fun!!! Jijijiji....

I'm worried about young Lois health.... what's wrong with her??? And I believe Tempus hasn't appeared yet...

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