Woah. I was trying to figure it out if it was Dan, Clark, or Jimmy at one point. For just a second I even felt pity for Dan until I realized Lois was with the right guy. Just goes to show that at times with the right writer behind the scenes you can make us feel bad for the other guy.
Aw, thanks, Carrie. Yeah, I tried to keep it mysterious to keep everyone guessing.
At first I thought it was Lex, but than when he mentioned she reminded him of someone I suspected it might be Scardino. He might not have been the most likable of people, but in the end even he must have realized Lois was with the right man for her.
It would have saved himself a lot of grief if he had followed the signs.
Very neatly done!
Thanks Morgana! Yes, Scardino would have saved himself a lot of grief and pain if he had paid attention to the signs. No matter how great a guy you are if you're not the one she loves you're the wrong guy. End of story.
Geez, and you call me ‘Introspective Queen’!
Beautiful work Val. Interesting choice of Scardino and you pulled it off really well. An interesting look into a character that’s often written just to annoy.
Aww, thanks Feli. I'm glad I could do it justice. You'll always wear the crown for Introspectives though
Yeah, I know I'm guilty of writing Dan just to annoy at times so I thought getting in his head would be a challenge. Seeing things from the other side is hard sometimes but necessary.
Thanks everyone for the comments.