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FDK: If You Only Knew 4/15 #277044 09/23/17 04:41 PM
Joined: Jul 2017 Posts: 571 Likes: 12 Southern Pines, NC CarrieRene OP Columnist
OP CarrieRene Columnist Joined: Jul 2017 Posts: 571 Likes: 12 Southern Pines, NC	Feedback for If You Only Knew. Yes, there might be a couple of mistakes, but we try our hardest to make sure all mistakes are corrected before posted. We are only human if mistakes occur. Thank you to those that do leave feedback from the bottom of my heart. And those do not leave feedback but read the story, thank you for reading.

Re: FDK: If You Only Knew 4/15 CarrieRene #277086 09/27/17 02:49 PM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,655 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana Pulitzer
Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,655 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast	Quote Broken machinery. Rotten roofs. Dead crops. There was so much his parents hadn’t told him. Missing Lois seemed to be the least of his worries right now. Oh my, the Kent farm has indeed fallen on hard times! He really does need the help and reassurances of his girlfriend. Its during a crisis such as this when a relationship is truly tested. That's when you know the person will remain forever by your side or will fade away at the first sign of trouble. Quote She walked toward the tractor and grimaced when she saw a handprint welded into the side. He only did that when he was angry or frustrated. The entire time she’d known him, she’d only seen him lose control a handful of times. Each time there had been special circumstances. Though the current situation was extenuating as well, this time there was no bad guy to stop. No super-villain to put behind bars. You couldn’t take a heart attack and put it in prison for hurting those you cared about. You couldn’t arrest it. I to agree with Lois on this one. Super powers cannot fight against that! Wow! I have been reading Lois and Clark fanfic for six years, this is the first time in my reading history these two have faced off in physical combat. Yikes!!! Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK: If You Only Knew 4/15 CarrieRene #277104 09/29/17 08:31 PM
Joined: Jul 2017 Posts: 571 Likes: 12 Southern Pines, NC CarrieRene OP Columnist
OP CarrieRene Columnist Joined: Jul 2017 Posts: 571 Likes: 12 Southern Pines, NC	You mean Lana and Lois? Oh yeah, no one messes with the Kent's and gets away with it in Lois' eyes. They don't deserve Lana meddling in their affairs or saying Jonathan deserved what he got. Lois is furious with this woman standing in Clark's bedroom.

Re: FDK: If You Only Knew 4/15 CarrieRene #277112 09/30/17 05:32 PM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,655 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana Pulitzer
Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,655 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast	Quote You mean Lana and Lois? Oh yeah, no one messes with the Kent's and gets away with it in Lois' eyes. They don't deserve Lana meddling in their affairs or saying Jonathan deserved what he got. Lois is furious with this woman standing in Clark's bedroom. Yes. I did mean a serious fight between Lana and Lois, normally it is a war of words. Not actually fighting! I really should have finished the comment, but was in a hurry to post. So happy to see Lois and Clark at least in the same state and house! Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK: If You Only Knew 4/15 CarrieRene #277114 09/30/17 09:24 PM
Joined: Jan 2009 Posts: 4,025 Birmingham, AL folc4evernaday Pulitzer
folc4evernaday Pulitzer Joined: Jan 2009 Posts: 4,025 Birmingham, AL	That cow deserves a name! She baptized Lana in manure where she belonged. Poor Clark! Hopefully, those two can get on the same page. ~ Folc4evernaday Jodi Picoult - You might not write well every day, but you can always edit a bad page. You can't edit a blank page. https://loisclarktribute.com Subscribe on YouTube

Re: FDK: If You Only Knew 4/15 CarrieRene #277370 10/21/17 02:18 PM
Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 1,702 Canada J jackiek Merriwether
jackiek Merriwether J Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 1,702 Canada	Glad Lois didn’t let Clark keep her away and went to Smallville anyways. Lol at Lana getting what she deserved. The nerve of that woman! I’m glad Lois didn’t believe a word she said. Wow! A physical fight between them? I really hope Clark sees what’s really going on here. Superman: I hear you've been looking for me. Lois: All my life.

Re: FDK: If You Only Knew 4/15 CarrieRene #277371 10/21/17 07:50 PM
Joined: Jul 2017 Posts: 571 Likes: 12 Southern Pines, NC CarrieRene OP Columnist
OP CarrieRene Columnist Joined: Jul 2017 Posts: 571 Likes: 12 Southern Pines, NC	Thank you, Val and JackieM. Yes, Bessie the Cow will make another appearance shortly. Yes, let's hope Clark sees what is really going on with Lana. I am going to try and start working on the new chapter soon (two other fics I am working on (finishing up Into The Fire and a new story coming soon).

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