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FDK: World of Cuisine (1/1) #98873 01/21/14 09:46 PM
Joined: Jun 2011 Posts: 2,131 California Mouserocks OP Kerth
OP Mouserocks Kerth Joined: Jun 2011 Posts: 2,131 California	Comments? Questions? I couldn't beat the idea off. :p Nothing spoils a good story like the arrival of an eye witness. --Mark Twain

Re: FDK: World of Cuisine (1/1) #98874 01/21/14 10:51 PM
Joined: Apr 2008 Posts: 332 Likes: 1 Lady Loisette Beat Reporter
Lady Loisette Beat Reporter Joined: Apr 2008 Posts: 332 Likes: 1	Very cute and funny. I really enjoyed it, especially Lois’ reaction when Clark told her what happened. It also reminded me of a story I’m currently working on where my character is pregnant and wakes her husband in the middle of the night to send him out for something she was craving, which made the story even more amusing to me. "Who's asking? Clark... or Superman?"

Re: FDK: World of Cuisine (1/1) #98875 01/22/14 03:25 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 699 Ontario, Canada IreneD Columnist
IreneD Columnist Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 699 Ontario, Canada	Adorable! Irene I try to take one day at a time, but sometimes several days attack me at once.

Re: FDK: World of Cuisine (1/1) #98876 01/22/14 10:09 AM
Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner
VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA	I love the idea of Clark forgetting to change from his suit when he lands in Hong Kong to get groceries. in my book. Cute story. VirginiaR. "On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling" --- "clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.

Re: FDK: World of Cuisine (1/1) #98877 01/22/14 10:55 AM
Joined: Sep 2013 Posts: 1,466 USA LMA Top Banana
LMA Top Banana Joined: Sep 2013 Posts: 1,466 USA	Wonderful story Thanks! Laura "Where's Clark?" "Right here." ...two simple sentences--with so much meaning. ~Lois and Clark in 'House of Luthor'~

Re: FDK: World of Cuisine (1/1) #98878 01/23/14 03:30 PM
Joined: May 2011 Posts: 6,142 Likes: 2 Connecticut Deadly Chakram Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Deadly Chakram Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: May 2011 Posts: 6,142 Likes: 2 Connecticut	Quote Gasps of shock and recognition and ran through the people as he strode forward, crowds parting before him respectfully. Pssst! Clark! You're still in the suit. Quote proceeding to order the long list of items that his very pregnant wife had requested. That DOES constitute an emergency! Quote and now, on top of that, he had jeopardized his identity. Well, unless his cell screams "I'm Clark Kent," I'm sure it's not that bad. Quote waving some money at the man. Good thing he didn't pull out his credit card. Quote “I wish I could get some of the spicier stuff, but I guess this will have to do. What time is it there?” Ugh. Pregnant heartburn is the worst. Quote “Clark Jerome Kent! Again?! You promised!” Uh-oh! Someone's been hanging around Martha too much! Quote as he overheard her muttering about how she’d have to learn how to cook just to keep him from spilling his secret. Ah-ha! His true motive for not spinning out of the suit! Great little story, Mouse! Loved it. Battle On, Deadly Chakram "Being with you is stronger than me alone." ~ Clark Kent "One little spark of inspiration is at the heart of all creation." ~ Figment the Dragon

Re: FDK: World of Cuisine (1/1) #98879 01/24/14 09:00 AM
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Ingeborg Blogger I Joined: Jan 2014 Posts: 21	Hi. This story was cute. It made me smile. I agree with Virginia that Superman buying food is not that big a problem, but it still makes a funny image to see a superhero checking his phone as he waits in line to buy take-out.

Re: FDK: World of Cuisine (1/1) #98880 01/24/14 10:03 AM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,662 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana Pulitzer
Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,662 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast	This story made me chuckle! Superman on a checkout line is hilarious! Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK: World of Cuisine (1/1) #98881 01/25/14 06:49 PM
Joined: Feb 2008 Posts: 2,823 IolantheAlias Pulitzer
IolantheAlias Pulitzer Joined: Feb 2008 Posts: 2,823	I'm sure the restaurant people wanted to keep him waiting as long as possible so there would be all that word-of-mouth about "Superman visits X Restaurant!"

Re: FDK: World of Cuisine (1/1) #98882 01/26/14 01:04 AM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 8,948 Likes: 28 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 8,948 Likes: 28	Oooh! Shorty! I mean, story! Quote Gasps of shock and recognition and ran through the people as he strode forward, crowds parting before him respectfully. Awww… he’s still a celebrity! Quote Clark was completely oblivious to all this as he looked over his list one last time before he suddenly found himself at the front of the line. Pregnant Lois? Okay, I read someplace that Clark’s already married in this story, sooo… Quote Finally, deciding that Lois would be less likely to kill him for this slip up if he came bearing gifts of food, Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

Re: FDK: World of Cuisine (1/1) #98883 01/28/14 05:19 PM
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John Lambert Pulitzer J Joined: Aug 2012 Posts: 2,549 Detroit, Michigan	very funny story. I am not sure this was so bad, unless when he was ordering the things Clark said something like "these are for my very pregnant wife." That would have been bad. John Pack Lambert

Re: FDK: World of Cuisine (1/1) #98884 01/28/14 07:42 PM
Joined: Jun 2011 Posts: 2,131 California Mouserocks OP Kerth
OP Mouserocks Kerth Joined: Jun 2011 Posts: 2,131 California	Thanks everyone for your comments! I think the general idea I had was less about how bad it was that Clark was going to reveal his identity this way and more that Superman was going to have a couple of PR problems. If Superman strolled up to my restaurant, you can bet that I'd be advertising that Superman flew around the world to eat there! :p I don't have time to comment individually. In fact, I might have to take a break for a while... School's started back up. Nothing spoils a good story like the arrival of an eye witness. --Mark Twain

Re: FDK: World of Cuisine (1/1) #98885 01/30/14 01:58 AM
Joined: May 2011 Posts: 6,142 Likes: 2 Connecticut Deadly Chakram Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Deadly Chakram Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: May 2011 Posts: 6,142 Likes: 2 Connecticut	I think the bigger issue is the cash. Where did Superman get money, since he doesn't charge for his services? A secret job, maybe? But that would mean a secret identity, since Superman doesn't pay taxes or have sla social security number. Or, he's illegally withholding money from the government. That's about the worst PR nightmare for him, I think, because it totally priez into his private life. Battle On, Deadly Chakram "Being with you is stronger than me alone." ~ Clark Kent "One little spark of inspiration is at the heart of all creation." ~ Figment the Dragon

Re: FDK: World of Cuisine (1/1) #98886 01/30/14 02:51 AM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,662 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana Pulitzer
Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,662 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast	Take care Mouse. School takes a lot of work and concentration. Now get back to the books! Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK: World of Cuisine (1/1) #98887 03/16/14 03:26 PM
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