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FDK - The End Of the Road - 17/19 #92788 01/15/13 12:58 AM
Joined: Jun 2004 Posts: 3,145 Likes: 3 Southwest USA T Terry Leatherwood OP Pulitzer
OP Terry Leatherwood Pulitzer T Joined: Jun 2004 Posts: 3,145 Likes: 3 Southwest USA	More angst for our favorite couple. You know, I think lunkheadedness may be contagious. And it looks like this: Life isn't a support system for writing. It's the other way around. - Stephen King, from On Writing

Re: FDK - The End Of the Road - 17/19 #92789 01/15/13 06:02 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,837 California fly-over country Artemis Pulitzer
Artemis Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,837 California fly-over country	Oh, a long chapter. YAYAYYAY. Must save to read later. Later dude Artemis History is easy once you've lived it. - Duncan MacLeod Writing history is easy once you've lived it. - Artemis

Re: FDK - The End Of the Road - 17/19 #92790 01/15/13 09:55 AM
Joined: Jul 2010 Posts: 3,883 Pensacola, Florida KenJ Pulitzer
KenJ Pulitzer Joined: Jul 2010 Posts: 3,883 Pensacola, Florida	Hi Terry, Give Lucy a 2x4 . Herb replied, “My boy, I never say … impossible.” "Lois and Clarks" My stories can be found here kj

Re: FDK - The End Of the Road - 17/19 #92791 01/15/13 07:55 PM
Joined: Aug 2012 Posts: 2,549 Detroit, Michigan J John Lambert Pulitzer
John Lambert Pulitzer J Joined: Aug 2012 Posts: 2,549 Detroit, Michigan	Clark is just too good at assuming he has no chance. I hope Lois will find a way to tell him that he is the other man. John Pack Lambert

Re: FDK - The End Of the Road - 17/19 #92792 01/17/13 02:09 AM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,657 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana Pulitzer
Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,657 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast	The road is winding down... Nice quiet part, especially after the emotional roller-coaster you have had us on for the past few parts. Lucy at first glance is a real pill. In fact, her behavior mirrors her sister's treatment of Clark when they first met. So I agree with KenJ; bring on the 2x4! She gets to tell him that she figured out their relationship before they did? Seriously? Oh well, its good to know the famed Lane intution wasn't just given to Lois! Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK - The End Of the Road - 17/19 #92793 01/18/13 04:15 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,837 California fly-over country Artemis Pulitzer
Artemis Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,837 California fly-over country	Lucy had it right in a nutshell: Quote “You heard what she said. Lois lied to Lex because she loves someone else. And I’m not about to get between her and whoever he is.” Lucy stared at him for a long moment, then said, “You know, I think it must be something in the water that makes people in Metropolis so stupid when it comes to personal relationships.” “Huh?” “You’re repeating yourself yet again. Isn’t that redundantly redundant?” “No. I mean, yes, it is, but what did you mean?” Lucy grinned impishly again. “Nothing. I’m going to brush my teeth and hit the hay, and you’d better still be here when Lois wakes up.” Yes, there is something in the water, Clark! Think, man, think! Then you can get to this: Artemis History is easy once you've lived it. - Duncan MacLeod Writing history is easy once you've lived it. - Artemis

Re: FDK - The End Of the Road - 17/19 #92794 01/19/13 04:17 PM
Joined: Jun 2004 Posts: 3,145 Likes: 3 Southwest USA T Terry Leatherwood OP Pulitzer
OP Terry Leatherwood Pulitzer T Joined: Jun 2004 Posts: 3,145 Likes: 3 Southwest USA	Since everyone who left feedback this time agrees that one or both of them are being idiots, I'll just say, "You're right! And we've got two more chapters of idiocy to go!" Next part up soon! After that, one more chapter and a brief epilogue, and we will have come to the end of a very long road. Life isn't a support system for writing. It's the other way around. - Stephen King, from On Writing

Re: FDK - The End Of the Road - 17/19 #92795 01/21/13 04:15 PM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,657 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana Pulitzer
Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,657 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast	I for one want to say thank you for a very satisfying read. It has been a long and wonderous road indeed! Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

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