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Hey, I caught up so well I get to be first on this one. laugh

Tempus! That begger! :p What an original way to use him though, Laura! My heart was in my mouth following Penny as she slowly but surely put it all together.

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How rude! Didn't Japan know to control its tectonic plates? Why did they have to move right now? Superman needed a day off.
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I was on the edge of my seat during Penny's confrontation with Superman, willing Clark to find a way to turn her suspicions.

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Penny wrapped her arms around his neck and pulled him close. "But I am in danger. In danger of falling, falling madly in love with you." She placed a soft kiss on his cheek and moved to his lips.
<growl> Back off, blondie!

And poor Clark! His state of absolute panic when he returned to Lois was superbly written, Laura! Wanted to give him a hug. <G>

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"Her? Senorita Psychopath?
goofy Thank goodness Clark has Lois batting for him on his team! thumbsup

And then, after all that, you wrapped this up with a wonderfully waffy final scene and this:

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Their love could survive anything.
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I enjoyed every moment of this story, Laura. Almost sad it's over.

LabRat (rushing over to nfic... <G>)



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WOW! A great wrap-up! smile1

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Laura,

This is so well done.

I enjoyed the whole thing so much.

Love the Lane-Kent teamwork on Penny.

Adore the humor sprinkled throughout. Penny was hiliarious.

Mrs. Penny Superman, probably a genius!

What a great read,
CC


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Wonderful Laura, well done.Laura


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Oh, that was so good, Laura! Congratulations!

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Hi,

Great story! thumbsup

Congratulation!
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Lois moved to get Clark a pillow, inwardly laughing at his Oscar-worthy performance. As she leaned down to give him a reassuring kiss, she noticed something different about his face. His eyes were blue! Clark must be wearing those blue contact lenses she'd tried to wear as a teenager! What a good idea! He was brilliant. She was brilliant, too. No, *they* were a brilliant *team*.
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This is a great rewrite of one of the nicest episodes of Season IV. thumbsup

It's sexy and funny and the solution is brilliant. Poor Penny! evil


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Thank you, everyone that has posted feedback on this story! I was really nervous posting it because it is my first story that has had a real a plot and a major character that wasnlt Lois, Clark, or HG Wells smile . I am really glad you all seemed to like Penny. She was so much fun to write! I sort of had an idea of how someone that is obsessed would behave and how something so simple might sober her up. I was trying to convey that she was infactiuated with the *idea* of Superman while Lois was in love with the real man.

Thanks for reading this story, and I am glad you enjoyed it!

- Laura smile


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"A hero is an ordinary individual who finds the strength to persevere and endure in spite of overwhelming obstacles." -- Christopher Reeve

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