I love the fact that it was CJ that had to get the key to the city. But I have to wonder about this tendency. Even tag-teaming the Superman role, it still seems like CJ is getting the short end of the stick.
And of course, this was cute:
CJ subtly raised a brow at him, causing him to scowl for a second.
<Jay...>
<I can’t help it!>
And the down side of having a telepathic link to your partner:
<She better not start talking about her friend Casper...>
<Lois! Don’t make me look insane!>
<How?>
<You almost made me laugh aloud!>
I liked the way you tied the CJ/Rachel history to the plot here. It provides some more connectivity.
And finally, I like the lecture part. I know that lecture. In fact, years ago when I used to tutor Physics, I think I pretty much gave most of that lecture.
Bob