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Again, thanks to Nancy, Michael, and Rel...

Posting next on Sunday, either at around midnight or noon CST... depending on when I go to sleep.

TOC | Part 21

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Then her gaze met Luthor’s. She instinctively turned and buried her head against Clark’s shoulder. <Lois? Are you okay? I didn’t mean to upset you...>

<Look at Luthor...>

Clark peaked and stilled. Luthor's expression was momentarily unguarded. His lips were curled in a snarl of rage while contempt shone in his eyes. From one instant to the next the expression was gone and Luthor’s face mirrored the amusement of his companions.
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Hi Sara! wave

Loved the whole Key to the City bit.

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<She better not start talking about her friend Casper...>

<Lois! Don’t make me look insane!>

<How?>

<You almost made me laugh aloud!>
Too late... clap

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Hi Sara

I like the way you are portraying Luthor, his evilness is great.
And I like it that he shows it from time to time even if it is just for seconds.

I'm glad that Jay seems to accept being Superman so Clark doesn't have to do that alone.

I'm looking forward to Sunday

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I love the fact that it was CJ that had to get the key to the city. But I have to wonder about this tendency. Even tag-teaming the Superman role, it still seems like CJ is getting the short end of the stick.

And of course, this was cute:
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CJ subtly raised a brow at him, causing him to scowl for a second.

<Jay...>

<I can’t help it!>
And the down side of having a telepathic link to your partner:
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<She better not start talking about her friend Casper...>

<Lois! Don’t make me look insane!>

<How?>

<You almost made me laugh aloud!>
I liked the way you tied the CJ/Rachel history to the plot here. It provides some more connectivity.

And finally, I like the lecture part. I know that lecture. In fact, years ago when I used to tutor Physics, I think I pretty much gave most of that lecture. goofy

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Michael: Did you catch the part I added after you betad? =P

Kathryn84: I'm glad Lex came off appropriately evil, ~.^ And I'm glad you're looking forward to the next chapter, =)

Bob: One thing to remember is that they both do things we don't hear about. As for CJ, he still has a few issues... but he has accepted that he can't just give up... I also tend to focus more on Lois and Clark, so CJ and Rachel get shifted to the side a bit, >< As for the connectivity, I tried hard to make it a point to make the 'episodes' flow into each other more. Characters remember more of what happened to them in the past and it affects how they act in the future... unlike I often felt in the show.

PS- I'm glad everyone like the lecture, =)


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/rushes to revision tra- re-read/
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<Hey, Cal.>

<What, Jay?>

<Who gets to keep this sucker?>

<All yours...>
LOL

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